Looking good. I really like the composition and color choice. I'm sure you can guess what I'm going to say but I will say it anyway: you should fix the wanky eye, and the lips...I have chubby cheeks so the lips should have a shadow when they meet my cheeks. And you need to work the hair, it's not pretty quite yet ; ). overall I think you need to spend a couple more hours on it...4 should do it perhaps. I know your working on your 6 foot one at home but since you don't have anything to do in Miss A's class you should work on this then
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ReplyDeleteLooking good. I really like the composition and color choice. I'm sure you can guess what I'm going to say but I will say it anyway: you should fix the wanky eye, and the lips...I have chubby cheeks so the lips should have a shadow when they meet my cheeks. And you need to work the hair, it's not pretty quite yet ; ). overall I think you need to spend a couple more hours on it...4 should do it perhaps. I know your working on your 6 foot one at home but since you don't have anything to do in Miss A's class you should work on this then
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